Monday, March 5, 2012

A memory or a dream ?


To walk besides you
through the rain washed lane
of a tiny village
tucked deep in my brain

the earth would smell
of the fragrance of your skin
your breath upon my cheeks
as you turn towards the wind

the heady scent of champak flowers
the distant singing bird
the lonely rain drop on your nose
I soak them all in greed

hearts would beat in tandem
our bodies close and warm
and then you touch me
a finger down my arm

would the clouds burst again
the river swell in me
and will the river find its way
to sumberge with the sea




14 comments:

  1. River always find its way to submerge with the sea, if no one built the dam in between ..:))..good one smee...& I am so happy to see u back ..)

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  2. well written---simple and niceeee---yeah, rivers meander and someday would submerge into the sea---some dry up enroute--. Thinking out of the box---some get surrounded by their own banks and become still ponds.

    keep writing--

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    1. Thanks SP, cheers to keep moving, to stop is to stagnate.

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    2. @yespee: And some into wells.. where johs croak hehhehe..
      kidding ..cudnt help it smee.. took ur space here :-)

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  3. Village tucked deep in brain.. that was a nice one smee
    last para is so full of passion and love
    Beautiful lines .. cheers smee!

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  4. @ pygma ---i know a another toad who croaks as well---the ugly toad---lol---smitha --sorry for using ur space---cudnt help respond

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  5. very well written smee chechiz!!.. yes off course the rivers have to submerge in the sea only at last!!!.... coz the flow is always from up to down!! very well done. good going..

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    1. Ty bro, for all the encouragement :)

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  6. Nice...
    River streams are going, to the sea of unknown deep ...
    :)

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