Thursday, September 1, 2011

Bridge on a River

She stood on the bridge,absolutely still, gazing at the water below. The old stone-bridge, with its moss grown edges must be atleast a hundred years old and the river flowing below even older. She was the bridge: watching over the river that was life which flowed through her and beyond her, so close yet so far. She wished to be the river - to flow into the sea eventually. Meanwhile, to embark on a journey of discovery, of coves and ravines, known and unknown ways, to mark her own path where there was none, to use every bit of life in her before the sea engulfed her.

Would the river ever hear the pleas of her heart, would she with her incessant flowing, one day, erode the bridge to collapse and merge with the river, to become one with life and march towards their destiny....

9 comments:

  1. River always looks up on the bridge as part of itself .. like a sweet reminder of the sense of belonging
    Bridge indeed belongs to the river.. for what is in a bridge without the river..
    The distance is meagre and the bond too strong:)
    Loved it smee..

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  2. Thanks Parvanam..

    That is so true and so well said Pygma..:-)Thanks dear.

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  3. "The bridge" is a nice concept.It stays in the river, feeling the river but, doesn't prevent it frm its journey ever..nice one smee---the hope is gud as well---

    on a lighter note---make sure there is no one on the bridge when it collapses---lol

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  4. Ty Nasnin :-)

    @SP Thanks saar. Tough luck!:D

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  5. Sorry for late coming..:)..written nicely as always..

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  6. This is beautiful .I would not say much .Each line is written beautifully.

    Your new reader .

    Follow each other .

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  7. Thanks SUma and Izdhiher. Appreciate your feedback :-)

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